As an avid game player and also a composer, I first off would like to say that I really like this track and it definitely reminds me of the other Neverball tunes. On what dtb said about to climax-like structure at 0:51, this actually tends to help rather than hurt in my opinion. There are some games that I have played where I get really stuck, but something about the energy is as if the music was pushing me forwards (Kind of like the song Pushing Onwards from VVVVVV which is a great example of this). The bass does seem to move a little, but I personally don't mind simply because it is the main melody. It isn't complicated, therefore it still seems to feel in the background for me
The only thing that bugs me is that I still have the copy from before you updated it, and I kind of liked the instrument sounds on the previous one better. I don't know why, it just seemed more intact and crisp instead of blending together into mesh. All in all, I absolutely LOVE this track A job well done
PS Is it just me or are the strings slightly sharper than the main melody? I don't know I tend to pick things apart a lot, so don't take my criticism harshly, I'm just trying to help and most of this is really minor stuff. Looking forward to seeing how this is used!